A Fibonacci sonnet: “Cop Show.”

September 16th, 2007

“Meyer.”

“Blakeney.”

“What gives?” He pointed inside.

“Guy doesn’t want to talk.”

“For this you call me away from lunch?”

“Look, the guy made it into a big black and white thing, okay?”

“It’s fine if you need to call me up here because I’m conveniently black, but I don’t like interrupting my lunch.”

“Your point, my good lieutenant, is well taken, and after you finish interrogating our suspected larcenist and assaulter in there, I will be happy to buy you a cookie from Tino’s down the block.”

As Blakeney shouldered open the door and flipped through the suspect’s file, he said, “Mr. Hughes, you are in a world of hurt already, and if you don’t start telling the detective and me what we need to know, it’s gonna go from bad to much worse before you go to sleep tonight, get me?”

The young man in the chair, all of nineteen, bristled and said, “Why you gotta come in here bustin’ on me, man — and why do I have to talk to this Jew cop anyway?”

Blakeney canceled Meyer’s retort wiht a raised palm, then said, “Me and this Jew cop are your ticket out of here.”

Hughes grumbled and said, “I didn’t do anything, anyway, so let me go.”

“Fingerprints say you were in that warehouse, Tommy.”

“You’re wrong about them fingerprints.”

“No, we’re not.”

Hughes pondered.

“Okay?”

“Okay.”

2 Responses to “A Fibonacci sonnet: “Cop Show.””

  1. What I’ve Learned So Far » Blog Archive » Getting the stories out. Says:

    […] Since I don’t have so much spare time on my hands these days, many of these pieces are sure to be quite short. (Soem of the longer ones may appear first in serial installments.) Don’t be surprised to see experiments with short forms such as palm-of-the-hand stories and Fibonacci sonnets. […]

  2. Resource constraints and creative freedom. -- Hoover’s Business Insight Zone Says:

    […] Countless examples from the world of art support the idea that tight contraints can foster great creativity. For an easy set of examples, consider the formal patterns of poetry; the haiku, sonnet, and sestina forms, for example, have provided a playground for poets as great as Shakespeare and Issa. One of my favorite constrained forms is the Fibonacci sonnet, in which you write a story with successive sentences that have the same number of words as the corresponding entry in the Fibonacci sequence of numbers. (I’ve composed a few of these.) […]

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